Change: clearly challenged and responded appropriately. It raised its head, roared fiercely, took a deep breath, and let forth an eruption of flame from its fanged   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 746)

Change: yet muscular frame. Across his back lay a well crafted and beautifully carved multicolored longbow. It was hard to discern exactly what kind of wood the   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 630)

Change: Pon," said a darkly hooded figure. His weather-beaten cloak covered a thin frame. Across his back lay a well crafted and beautifully carved longbow. We"We have been here a long time. Who knows--"Just then, there was a great crashing."THE DRAGON FOUNDS US! EVERYBODY,   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 595)

Change:  to distract the dragon."May I come with you. I have no one else to travel with." Asked Pon."Certainly." Eli answered, not even wondering what Egon would say. The three ran, Pon leading because he knew where the slopes were. To be continued by anybody...   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 351)

Change: . . . "Finally - you are here! I knew you would come!" shouted the wide-eyed and wild-haired man wearing discolored rags. His white hair stood out   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 207)

Change: (Catnip)Eli(Catnip)Eli (Catnip)Adventure Here is Sir Egon, and his apprentice, Eli. They are traveling far as Egon shows Eli the true lands. One day, they were   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 117)

Change: Here is Sir Egon, and his apprentice, Eli, are traveling far as Egon shows him the true lands. One day, they were hiking up a   View changes from previous version. (Word count: 112)